Solipsism Syndrome and The Artist
Journal Entry: Thu Apr 20, 2006, 3:43 PM
Hmm,
So, I've written quite a few pages of my Solipsism Syndrome story... still no name for it yet, annoyingly (I don't know why, but having a title helps me write) but I've also gotten distracted - I found the first draft of a piece of work entitled "The Artist" on my Hard Drive today - it's a piece I was writing just before Christmas about an artist (surprisingly!) living in a dystopian world who withdraws from the grim reality outside his door. He paints a beautiful painting, a representation of paradise lost. The world as he wishes it were. In order to paint this vision, he has to disconnect from everything else. So he stops going outside his rat-infested apartment, runs out of food, stops eating. His obsession with finishing the painting before he is again corrupted by the outside world leads eventually to his death just as he has completed the final brushstroke.
Now, the thing is, I love the STORY, but I'm not happy with the WRITING. So... I want to go back and do another draft. But I don't want to lose the thread on my Solipsism story. Dilemma.
*sigh* ah well, we'll see where they both go.
-Stephen-
Devious Comments
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Dan: Everybody wants to be happy.
Larry: Depressives don't. They want to be unhappy to confirm they're depressed. If they were happy they couldn't be depressed anymore. They'd have to go out into the world and live... Which can be depressing.
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Dan: Everybody wants to be happy.
Larry: Depressives don't. They want to be unhappy to confirm they're depressed. If they were happy they couldn't be depressed anymore. They'd have to go out into the world and live... Which can be depressing.
Just don't overwork... Thats the key!
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Dan: Everybody wants to be happy.
Larry: Depressives don't. They want to be unhappy to confirm they're depressed. If they were happy they couldn't be depressed anymore. They'd have to go out into the world and live... Which can be depressing.
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"People are always asking me if I know Tyler Durden"
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"I'm not the one who just got butt-fucked on national television Dwain!"
Additionally having a TV is great if you just want to veg. out to something!
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"People are always asking me if I know Tyler Durden"
Will likely get round to looking at some more of yours at some stage!
Take care.
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"People are always asking me if I know Tyler Durden"
in the background just in case. LOL Like you stuff
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DA banned me forever! Little punk ass kid's have no sense of humor. Especially that little faggot
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I can't afford the TV licence... I'm so poor! lol.
I plan to stay up all day - then I figure I'll be tired tonight and will be able to sleep.
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"People are always asking me if I know Tyler Durden"
watching TV, works for me everytime.
Well, almost.
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DA banned me forever! Little punk ass kid's have no sense of humor. Especially that little faggot
" Mirrorkills " the policy interpreter.
I didn't even know you were on here before!
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"People are always asking me if I know Tyler Durden"
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LOOK HOW I HAVE TO KEEP DOING THIS OVER AND OVER BECAUSE I AM NEVER SATISFIED BY IT.
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